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Tuesday, June 13, 2017

internal vs external conflict essay

Hamlet is a play more about internal than external conflict”. How far and in what ways do you agree with this view? 

Although Hamlet’s internal conflict – the potential deterioration of Hamlet’s sanity, his indecision over whether to act against Claudius – is often provoked by external conflict – the death of Claudius, and his “o’erhasty” marriage to Gertrude – the internal struggle of Hamlet himself has, over time, become more and more the essential conflict of the play, epitomized in the immortal line “to be, or not to be”. Whether debating the role of passion versus reason in Hamlet’s inaction, or quoting select, popularized lines (“there are more things in heaven and earth, Horatio”), it is the internal conflict, rather than the feuding or indeed the external political drama, which has made Hamlet ever more popular.
The internal conflict is certainly provoked by external conflict, the “foul and most unnatural murder” of King Hamlet by his brother. Beginning the play mid-conversation (“who’s there>”) creates an immediate sense of a place unsettled, the audience entering into something they don’t understand. A ghost is the conventional beginning to the revenge tragedy but also symbolizes the external conflicts of the world in which Denmark currently exists, something is “rotten” and must be solved before the country – and the rulers of it – can be peaceful.; Even in Claudius’ initial speech, the internal and external conflicts are clear: his announcement of his marriage to Gertrude is measured, stately and poetic in blank verse but riddled with internal contradictions: “With mirth in funeral, and with dirth in marriage”. Though he might try, Claudius can’t mask the internal conflict of his increasing difficulty, which comes to a climax in the chapel scene where he feels unable to pray and ask for forgiveness, because he does not feel guilt as he should and is unwilling to give up “my crown, mine own ambition, and my queen.” Although arguably Claudius’ conflict becomes externalized in his own plots against Hamlet, first to remove him to England to be murdered and then conspiring with Laertes, he is attempting to resolve his own internal conflict: his desire to get away with murder and enjoy its spoils without the punishment he knows he should expect.
While for Claudius, internal conflict provokes external resolution, the external conflicts experienced by Hamlet manifest themselves in internal conflict. His initial soliloquy expresses his conflict between obeying what he knows to be God’s law, and his own desire to end his life; “that the Everlasting had not fix'd His canon 'gainst self-slaughter”. Hamlet’s soliloquies become increasingly tormented as he argues with himself, and the actions he believes he must take as a result of the ghost’s instructions. As Hamlet progressively appears to become more mad, his physical appearance onstage often changes markedly as well. Although Hamlet’s madness is questioned – he frequently speaks prose when ‘mad’ – and it suits him – yet retains his intellectual ability to play with words and perform linguistic gymnastics with both Gertrude and Claudius.
Further external conflicts in the play have been diminished over time, for example the political conflicts between Norway and Denmark, often reducing Fortinbras’ role even to the point of removing him completely (Zeffirelli, Olivier) and giving his final lines and role to Horatio. In contrast, the inner conflict of Hamlet’s decision-making has become the heart of the play. Hamlet’s initial conflict is the misery over his father’s death, an “unmanly grief” according to Claudius, and even his mother asks him to put aside his mourning clothes. Yet as the ghost reveals its murder, Hamle’ts conflict increase exponentially; does he kill Claudius and avenge his father? Should he disobey his father’s command to leave Gertrude to her conscience? Hamlet’s indecision has provoked critics to comment on his overly rationalized thought process in the chapel scene, with Johnson arguing that his desire to send Claudius to hell made the scene “too terrible to utter”, while Romantics including Coleridge see Hamlet as paralyzed by the strength of his emotions. Yet the latter problem of Gertrude seems to provide most of Hamlet’s internal conflict, coming to terms not only with his mother’s re-marriage but her potential complicity in his father’s death and her sexuality. Whether this is, as Freud suggested, a result of Hamlet’s Oedipus complex or instead an Elizabethan disquiet over an older woman’s apparent sexual appetite (“You cannot call it love; for at your age / The hey-day in the blood is tame”). Again, while the internal conflict becomes externalized in Hamlet’s vicious attack on Gertrude – including his sexual imagery tinged with disgust (“rank sweat of an enseamed bed”) and sometimes portrayed with physical violence – it is Hamlet’s inner conflict which drives the scene.

Ultimately, although the conflicts in ‘Hamlet’ are myriad, and will no doubt further shift in interest as Shakespearean scholarship continues, it is C.S. Lewis who encapsulates the question of whether internal, or external, conflict is the prevailing force. In ‘Hamlet’, “the real and lasting mystery of our human situation has been greatly depicted” – ‘Hamlet’ endures because in it, Shakespeare explores the mysteries of grief and loss, love and jealousy, madness and sanity – qualities which all humanity may experience, may even recognize externally, but which we must all struggle with within ourselves. 

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